but off course my friend,money is nothing without you,and not the other way
you are the key ,you make the rules,you make the money and you can stay without it
this is a very thoughtful write..humans are lovely and could do anything
if the was a strong will..how i loved this,though short its great..meant a lot
lovely write..
I can definitely agree. The world revolves around money, which is incredibly sad. My history teacher is fond of pointing out to us that money only has value if you believe it does, and I do agree with her; it's great to see that it's not just the two of us who feel that way. I like how you used the example of education to point out the flaws in the money system; being the same age as you, I can definitely relate to this poem as I am beginning to have to think about university fees, and am angered at the potential ability of money to hold me back.
I liked this for pointing out the stupidity in relying purely on your money to get you through life. Blaming everything but yourself for your failure, good way of putting it.
I really liked this peom, its funny to me how money IS just a piece of thin paper, but it takes over everything in our lives... i really wish we had no money, becasue seriously without it we could just do and get whatever... but we cant because people would go over the top with getting stuff and stores would be wiped out!! Tht wouldnt of happend if it started out tht way, BUT you can make laws..but let me stop babbling... without it you a pretty much screwed you know? But i like how you interpretted this, it makes you think, hah like i just did sorry you probably dont understand wht im talking about, but just know its a large compliment on your short but insightful poem!
Alyssa
I'm Holly, I am eighteen.
I like feed-back on my writing to improve myself.
I'm loud, sarcastic, always smiling.
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