Careless Mistakes on St.Patties Day

A little poem about an old St. Patricks Day

I feel like scribbles or Alice in Wonderland,

Maybe I'm confused or just don't understand.

So i've got my guard up even though I want to put it down,

Some things have been going around.

Anxiety builds up,

Feels like I'll throw up as I'm waiting for you to call.

So addicted,

But also tormented by the fact you may only want in my pants.

I'm sneaking out to go with you,

Hold me close running your fingers through my hair.
Let's make careless mistakes on St.patties Day,

cause I'm a good girl learning how to inhale.

Author's Note

Leave me stuff.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

that was nice..
we all start like that..weak bones and try to get tough
life is a puzzle we try to solve..so we are suspicious
though we may not want to,we may get hurt
i am still learning ,so be easy on me
so take care of me,my bones are still weak
i am learning to live..i love to live..dont make me hate it
another lovely story..i loved to read
lovely write

[Scarlet Pulse]

An interesting subject to write about and I liked it. I think your poem could use a little more. Run with the idea, and give some imagery, and some interesting language to help the reader be in the moment with the speaker. I think your poem makes the imagination run and think about what did happen on that day. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

St. Pattie days had cause great memories for many. Poem is very good. Description and story brought me in. Ending was very good. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aradie Rain]

It's good to learn how to have fun. Careless mistakes we make up for them later, but their fun while they last
~Aradie