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different views on sex is holdin us back....just my thoughts

The words come so easy

As we talk in faded light.

You're my Valentine's date,

And here with you feels right.

 

We've been friends for over a year,

So knowing you isn't new.

And though more than friends is,

I'm not analyzing my next move.

 

Yes, I know you're older,

There's 6 years in the way.

I'm 20 and you're 26,

But the age gap feels like days.

 

I don't know what it is,

Why you make me smile.

I can't put my finger on it,

But I'd like to talk for a while.

 

Maybe it's your sense of humor,

Your random jokes make me laugh.

Maybe it's that when I'm with you,

I forget about the past.

 

I know there's a, "conflict of interests,"

I'm a virgin and you're not.

You don't put pressure on me,

But we don't know what we want.

 

So there's a complication

Standing in our way,

But why are we so worried?

This was just a first date.

 

I've spent too much time before

Worrying bout what's to come.

Let's just close our eyes and jump,

And deal with the mess when it's done.

Reviews

[littlelilypurplebride]

i wish i would of did this i rushed into life too fast but never did any of it as a teeager i did at 20 and i don't either of us was ready and we didn't we was young and dumb lol... but don't regret it have a beautiful blessing from god my son i got pergnet at 20 got married april 8,2000 had him when i was 21 June27,2000 listen to your heart be safe and don't rush and don't do anything you don't want to sexual but we also did it cause we we'er in love would only do it out of love and if i want to be with him for the rest of my life wouldn't do did with anyone it's great you know him so well. you a amazing job writing this so sweet. god bless lily

[Ashley Myers]

taking chances issometimes the best way to go because if you dont then youll never know what could have happened. such a sweet poem. it made me smile

[Ruth]

Sometimes, we just have to go with our hearts! Too many times do we feel the need to weigh the pro's and con's, but its wise I guess lol
Great poem love!
xx

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a wonderful poem and I have to say Your Wonderful! You have your head in the right direction and you should never give of yourself to someone, unless YOU are absolutely ready to. Alot of times sex before both partners are ready can do more harm in a relationship than good and your right.. Most of the time sex holds a relationship back, esspecially if one partner is ready and one isn't. You have a very keen insight I have come to know and apprecieate and I will end this review with a common statement "True Love Waits" If the guy is not willing to wait on you being ready, then maybe feelings need to be anylized in the relationship. You did a marvellous Job putting something so delicate into poetics and It was a pleasure to read! Thank you!