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A Poem by Heather D
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Dalton and I had a nasty break up. this pretty much sums it up.

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Throughout our whole relationship, I thought that you were strong.
I never dreamed, after all this time, I could possibly be wrong.
My parents didn't approve of you, so every day was a war.
But I loved you, so I fought, you were the one I'd been waiting for.
You didnt have to fight your parents, it was so easy for you.
But when it was your time to fight, I thought I knew what you would do.
We got in trouble, our moms argued, about something not involving us.
Then my mom talked to you, you raised your voice, and then began to cuss.
Respect for my parents is big for me, I couldn't believe what I was told.
You refused to apologize to her, I guess you thought you were being bold.
Right then it was your time to fight, to prove your love for me.
But you backed down, cowered in fear, were quick to admit defeat.
You just gave up, left it up to me, to fight and to decide.
But I can't fix the damage you've done, you won't try to fix it, you run and hide.
You hide like a child, a coward, a fool, I thought you loved me true.
What's funny is I'll find someone better, but I'm the best you'll ever do.

© 2011 Heather D


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sorry 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem passionate and strong.. And it reveals your inner convictions, I like that

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very well written. Good job i agree with nicole it was very passionate and bold. I also like that it flowed well and rhymed. =]


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Very passionate and bold. I love how you admit how you're stronger(than maybe others think). Very well spoken and fresh. Well done. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 7, 2009
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