Who is she...

Who is she...
 

who is she my sweetheart.. whom i loved... whom i adored... who is she whom took my first sights... who is she whom my heart shakes for her... she is the angel whom i stayed a nights because of her.. and because of the love and the adoring which i hold for her... who is she.. she is a brightness moon in the heart of the sky,around her a stars... she is the sun which lights a lovers` hearts.. she is the lasting light in the heart,eyes only can see it... who is she... she is the one whom said,... love you... adore you... my soul my heart created only because of you... she is the one whom said,... my life is so dark without you... no means to my life while you are not with me... she is the one whom said... loved you and still do... adored you till a death... that is whom i love... did you know her now... by: [email protected]

 

Reviews

[Helena]

"who is she..
she is a brightness moon in the heart of the sky,around her a stars...
she is the sun which lights a lovers` hearts..
she is the lasting light in the heart,eyes only can see it...
who is she..."

I adored each and every word that conveyed such deep feeling. Beautifully written from your talented pen.
Bravo!

Hugs Helena

[Babbette Francis]

I'm going to be honest and say- parts of this was misworded and hard understand in places. But I got the point you were trying to get accross. Normally I wouldn't say anything, I would just move on, but I believe the meaning of this is so beautiful and touching that needed to tell you all of how I felt. Your poetry is beautiful it just needs to be looked over again and edited here and there. Still all in all this is a heartbreaking piece.