The Grief

Within the last week going into this week I lost two people one I wasn't close too the other was my cousin.

The Grief

By: Hazel Grace

Five weeks alone

Two lost withing two of those weeks

Wish things didn't go south 

Wish they were here

Can you tell I'm grieving yet

There's a line between us

Unfinished work

Reviews

[Gee]

Tis hard when we lose loved ones, the heartache though does ease with the passing of time although the " missing" doesn't.
Your poem does a good job of expressing your feelings.
Good morning Lacey

[Chris Shaw]

Wish they were here

Sadly it takes time to come to terms with loss of any kind, particularly if the loss is a death. Your poem expresses your grief.

My condolences.

Chris

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Sorry to hear about your loss. This is a lovely tribute and speaks to their effect on your heart. Thank you for sharing your poem and thoughts Lacey.