why don't you love me

Why don't you love me
Not too much
But very much

Why don't you hate me
Not too much
but not at all

Why don't you say amen
To my incessant prayer
That includes you

Why don't you get angered
By me for things I say
But not too much

Why don't you let me know you
Via your mildness
And your wildness

Why don't you feel my proposal
That of hayzed hayzed apropos
About filling a hole

Why don't you let me fill it
The hole in your heart
With my glittering imperfection

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again, great oxymoron, "glittering imperfection"

to want some of everything, but not too much...
balance is what the heart needs, balance.

love how you put these stanzas together not too much but very much.
j.

[Ankita Dwivedi]

The poem is really sweet.
"Why don't you let me fill it .
the hole in your heart
with my glittering imperfection"
loved it . I am new .Please check my work and let me know what you think .

[Chris Shaw]

Not one of us is perfect. We all have our own imperfections. In personal relationships for them to work, I guess we have to accept the imperfections of others and learn to live and maybe love them. At the same time we need to accept that we too have our faults. A thought provoking little poem. I have just spent a few moments pondering. First of yours I have read hayzed and I am pleased I did.

Chris

[hayzed]

I’m so honored Anne. It’s such a greater one to have you go through my pieces. Thanks

[Paul Bell]

Great ending, how imperfect perfect does a man need to be before a woman will see what she's missing.
Though something tells me this woman is heading for the hills with the rest of womankind at her heels.

[hayzed]

I really appreciate your comment. Thanks a lot

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahme..]

This is very interesting to me! I especially liked the way you ended this poem with "glittering imperfection". Because imperfection is a flaw a negative to most you made the reader see it as a positive by using 'glittering'. Kudos.

[hayzed]

Thanks Nefertiti