Small Measure of Freedom

Small Measure of Freedom

A Poem by Eda
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The image of my late grandfather floating on top of the ocean for what seemed like an hour

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I look off into the distance 
and see you
Surrounded by an ocean of blue
Where I stand there is gushing wind
But where you lay in no dismay 
do I hear a slight whimper
You are all alone, 
floating in what seems like a pool of greatness
One against a group of many
But there is an unforgettable comfort to what I see 
that tells me you are temporarily free
And if no one bothered, 
you'd might just float there in eternity.

© 2015 Eda


Author's Note

Eda
ignore grammer and spacing

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Added on December 21, 2015
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