Honey

i love you honey. she says these words to me once a day. everyday. they slip easily from her lips and down into my bloodstream. those words could keep me high for days; my very own drug. she sings in the car and her voice sends me into an overdose. her kiss goodnight...could kill me in the best way. i use to wish for this type of love once a day.everyday. i used to wish for someone to float in my blood and intoxicate me with their presence. i used to wish for someone made from every Jason Mraz song and every valentines day cliche. but instead i found someone better. i found someone who makes me want to jump through a ring of fire just to deliver her the best flowers on her birthday. i found someone who would turn to ice in this 5 degree weather just to see me. she is the love song the comes after a heartbreak(and this time the song isn't stopping) she is the best of every world in my universe. she is the beautiful mess and the butterfly. the chocolates and the roses. she is my drug and my alcohol. she is...my love. and i'm her honey. and that makes my world....just right. Everyday.  

Reviews

[therisa]

Sigh. Braylin, are there anymore like your love, who's trans-friendly that don't mind moving to Canada? You're one very lucky person. Give my best, to your love, knowing I am jealous of you.

[braylin smith]

sadly not that i know of (i mean i know i'm in Maine which is basically Canada...just joking) but i'm sure in time you will find someone who will love you for who you are no matter what the outside world thinks of you. thank you so much for all the past reviews by the way! its nice knowing someone gets it :)

[therisa]

Your welcome, Braylin, but your words speak, about some of my own experiences, as a child and coming out. Just wish things were easier for us.

[J.L Hunter]

Not sure how to take this one. Don't know if the grammatical issues are done intentionally to insinuate a particular style, or you really have no idea what you are doing. My only other thought is that this was a joke and you don't take the craft seriously.

On that note, I want to say that reading it, I see potential once all of the mistakes are cleared up to be a nice little read. I don't normally give negative reviews, and I try to keep even the worst reviews slightly positive. This was just... eh. Please write another and send me a read request. I would like to see you actually try.