A Bisexual Moment

A Bisexual Moment
They come and go,
the twist of a sleeve
I look at the clock
I see a beige face
with hair like gold
my heart stops for a moment
I feel 100 years old.
Her eyes are lasers,
they twist me up in ropes
I'm down on my knees
holding my breath
waiting to speak
but my words won't come out
because I'm
thunderstruck
and I'm
scared as f**k
because never ever
has a woman looked at me
and made my heart beat
too quick.
And next to her
is a man with the taste
of rainbows and
martian delicacies
with eyes like oceans
and a sunshine smile.
A bisexual moment
where my breath freezes
my fingers fall off
no pleasure tonight
in the warmth,
the embrace of my bed
will not please me
tonight,
tonight
I sleep alone

Reviews

[Th3Authr]

Very emotional! So passionate! I loved it.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Wow, I really liked this poem. I love all the imagery and descriptions. Kudos!!

[Silvario]

very nice! i really, really enjoyed this. i loved the pace, the tempo. it almost read as lyrics (to me anyway). a powerful message delivered with strong emotion. vivid and palpable. i enjoyed your talent for creative description here.

very nicely done indeed :)

[GTVile]

Wow, experiental and crushing at the end. You took the reader on a ride of overwhelming emotional proportions. Excellent job in force feeding us with feeling.