Use me.

Use me,

Abuse me.

But don’t you dare,

Accuse me.

 

Of stealing your heart,

Of warming your soul.

Then taking all you have,

Then leaving you cold.

 

Use me,

Abuse me.

But don’t you dare,

Accuse me.

 

You’re falling apart.

I’m running,

In the dark.

Bleeding blue.

These feelings are true.

 

Use me,

Abuse me.

But don’t you dare,

Accuse me.

 

Of being immature.

Of missing adult words.

Then you’re sleeping,

With her.

 

Use me,

Abuse me…

Go ahead,

Accuse me.

　

Author's Note

Just... tell me how this makes you feel.

Reviews

[Ms.Bri]

..I feel pain lots of emotion. i relate to this. Very good job keep writing.

[Destiny]

I know of someone who can relate. Honestly, this made me want to scream.

[Raven Starhawk]

At the moment this reflects life very closely with its true words.

[Wolfwind]

I think the over all emotion that I feel from these words is anger, followed closely with the feelings of desperation.

Aaron

[_]

makes me feel well i don't know i've never had that type of heat in my life but the line were very potent and had strong statements behind them so yeah i guess that makes me feel good .

[Secret Lullaby]

i like it :) it made me a lil sad and it brings back some memories...i think some people will be able to relate to this..great job

[Sahar moonlight]

It makes me feel the way you feel.
The choice of your words just is a written version of what you were feeling.
This makes it a heartly piece.
Especially the last four lines

'Use me,
Abuse me…
Go ahead,
Accuse me.'

[highthought]

very aggressive it comes from a heart full of heat

[☢ZoMbIeS sLaYeR&#..]

i like this.. the words got to me. great job!

[Alex Vidmar]

Wow... This was well written. Honestly, it made me tear up. And I do not cry easily. You have a way with words Haylee. A very good way with words. What I like most about this is your "Use me,/ Abuse me/ Accuse me" Statement. It is well written in the way it is a lot like a losing battle... but it shows that you can have the strength to keep defending yourself. Once again, this is very well written and I am looking forward to reading more of your works.

Alex.