Could This Be Anymore Awesome?!

My new dream, is to play a heavy metal ballad that goes beyond all ballads ever created! There isn't much descriptions on sights but maybe I'll write a new one.

I can see it now

shining like the gem it truly is;

My dream to come true!

 

It starts off; curtains unpulled,

with a punching riff; pushing the envolope of sound and space

with my face-melting Schecter guitar.

In chimes another, and another, AND MORE!

 

Directly after me, as the curtains are raised,

Comes the powerful, driving bass

Moving the audiance

As they're completely engulfed in the sound of my rock.

 

Here comes the drums; pushing and shoving

forcefully makeing their debut.

Once the curtains are up,

Even more is revealed!

 

A grand piano with all its luster,

brings herself in with a syncronized melody.

With me right on top,

Making my stance on the hood of this ebony masterpiece!

 

All of us here in our usual alignments,

playing this balad of a harsher tone.

Gut splitting guitar, combined with hypnotic classical piano,

perfectly synced.

 

Creeping lyrics that crawl inside your head,

telling you it's gonna be alright,

THEN RIPPING YOUR DREAMS TO PIECES!

 

All of this in a crescendo amazement,

With me right on top,

Making my stance on the hood of this ebony masterpiece!

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

OMG! can you say wow!? The thought of a metal ballad just blows my mind! I love metal :-D :-D. Great imagery by the way. I could almost hear the music in my head. Almost. It drove me mad , I WANTED TO HEAR IT!! Its like somewhere in my head i could but my ears couldnt register.. such a tease! :-D great poem, definitely a favorite

[John Stussy]

.... DUDE!!!!!!!!! this rocks!!