Sonnet #1

I wroted a sonnet! It's not really a sonnet. But whatever. Missing a few lines, and doesn't completely fill the criteria. Have fun. I got bored. lol

Dude, look at that,

They're round,

They're voluptuous,

They're perfect

And sometimes soft.

Distacts all men

Except for Chad

A real smooth ride

Beatifully crafted

By the hands of God

They are made

     It's not you think, ugh

     It's a Volks Wagon Bug!

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

ha! you caught me...i'm a perv. love the bugs...'specially the originals. silly tricky piece, few typos. a smile maker, thanks.

[Deseret]

i really like this, it was great, although i was ready to click out of it when i was mislead, i guess i under estimate people :-)

[John Stussy]

....... I was thinking a Volkswagen Bug! lol this is pure genius, very misleading. proof that people have dirty minds.