The Comin's a Comin

I just wrote this. It has zero religious backgrounds so, yeah.

The comin's a comin'
Ain't no stopin' this.

The comin's a comin'
Better hurry and make your wish.

The comin's a comin'
No way out.

The comin's a comin'
Don't know what it is!

The comin's a comin',
Better choose fast!

The comin's a comin'
Here it comes! Get away!

The comin's a comin'
Don't stay to find out.

The comin's a comin'
The comin's a comin'!
The comin's a comin'!
The comin's a comin'!

The cmoin' done come,
and your still around.

The comin' done come,
now your six feet under this ground.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

This poem flows evenly. There are a few typo's which if you don't mind critiquing, I would be glad to email you. The poem would be better defined if you gave the reader a hint of what the "comin" is.

[Celtic Cat]

Yikes! If the comin's are coming I'm getting the heck out of here!!!! Wait...is that a worm next to me??? Shucks, I'm too late.
I like it.