Invisibility Cloak

Invisibility Cloak

A Poem by Terri

"I'm yelled at 24/7."

"No, you're not."

Half an hour gone

When will they stop...

...The yelling...

...The tears..

...The ignorance...

"You get away from it for 8 hours a day."

Should I just...

...Walk home...

...Join the screaming...

...Tell them they're both idiots...

Another 5 minutes gone

Water trickling from the stream

Time flying by

Dinner waiting

Staring at the time

On my phone

10 more minutes

Go wasted

"Terri, what do you think?"

I pull my invisibility cloak closer.

© 2009 Terri


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I pull my invisibility cloak closer.
Many of us can use that line. We all do this
from time to time. Even as a cop, you need
to get out of the stream.
Wonderful little poem.
You have no errors and the poem is brilliant.
Rated 100 %
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Ben
Very interesting. Those last few lines could have some commas or something... Very good!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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