Got Pacifism?

I don't even care,

I won't even dare,

This fight was never fair.

So into the distance I will stare,

Looking for a solution,

Looking for the conclusion,

One to end our violent revolution.

Not just an illusion,

More like a remedy,

One that will be the end of me,

It's the only solution I see

For I know freedom is never free.

So down this dark road I'll stroll.

As my wounds begin to take their toll,

I will push until I meet my goal,

For in this plan it is my role.

I will be hated for it,

But my boundary I have hit,

So they can throw their fit,

I no longer give a s**t.

This is just a small part,

Of someone that I should've stopped at the start,

But I listened to my heart,

At least I know my decision wasn't smart.

Author's Note

Basically, I wrote this while talking to a friend about what happened between me and one of my ex's.

Reviews

[Deck_As_Heck]

very cool I love.:)

[laughinglullaby]

this poem flows really well i like it

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is such a cool poem

[Kayla K]

The poem was amazing, I loved the rhyme and the purpose of it. From the first line, I was pulled in, and at the end I was very satisfied with it. Going into my favs

[TJ]

Loved the rhythm and the cadence of the poem. Plus it was a really cool metaphor!! I liked it.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This had an awesome beat to it, and the words were really powerful :) great write :) x

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

This was something I could really relate too all to well. You captured this moment in time with such great emotion and trigger thought invoking. It's very difficult to keep a realationship for too long isn't it? When one has scares so deep one believes they may never heal. Always taking responsibility, always taking the blame whether it is ours to take or not it is just our way. I love this piece.

[Skateprincess]

Ex's are always an unusual source for inspiration :) Great piece