My Special Place

Autumn.

The cool air chills me
Colorful leaves flying everywhere
I watch the orange sunset
The grass is cold as I run it through my fingers
I lay on a small blanket
The smell of flowers fill my nostrils
Trees are swaying as music fills the air
Beautiful music in my head clears my thoughts
I feel the rhythm and I get up and sway to the music
The wind whispers and sings along
I feel little drops of rain
I let the rain fall upon my face
Let them run down my skin as I dance
The music gets faster I dance to the beat
It rains harder and it washes over me my head cleared of any thought
I jump in the puddles
I laugh and sing as the trees whisper my name
I feel love I feel happiness I feel free
I breathe and take everything in
Loving every second and using every sense
I feel ecstatic and real
Like I'm a part of something bigger than me
Like my life has meaning
I hear my name being called and I run towards the voice
Everything becomes blurry
I smile.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I jump in the puddles
I laugh and sing as the trees whisper my name
I feel love I feel happiness I feel free
I breathe and take everything in
Loving every second and using every sense
I feel ecstatic and real
Like I'm a part of something bigger than me
Like my life has meaning "
So much cheer and positivism in this great write . I love those lines too...Thank you for penning...:)

[HavenMarie]

Thank you so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Again here... you take us to a place in which you see life for what its worth... a voice is present in the lines... a sense of exhibition... a release from the world that is... to the world that is yours...

[HavenMarie]

Thank you and thanks for reading and reviewing.

[Mystic]

nature is the biggest gift no doubt,,, and you portrayed it very beautifully :)

[HavenMarie]

Thank you and thanks for reading and reviewing. :)