Autumn haiku #3

I grow weary when the sun goes away

Day sleeps longer now

thus I want to hibernate

until crocus time.

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

So cute!

[Dinesh Sairam]

Simple and feel-good. I loved the usage of the word 'crocus' :) I'm a lover of haikus and loved this as such. Well done, Keep writing.

[Doctor JKC]

Just wake long enough
to see the daffodils.

I enjoyed all 3 haiku.
A beautiful form done wonderfully
by you, so in touch with nature.
Jack

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on winning the Haiku Contest!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning Haiku!

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Marie,

Wonderful. Simple. Ah, to sleep to crocus time...a wonderful dream.

Best regards,

Rick

[Clockwork]

This is sort of like a Haiku of mental flora. It is a snapshot of a thought in organic form. Pretty cool.

[Through the Gateway]

Very well done. Very beautiful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I hear you on this, the cooler wether and longer evenings can make you feel a bit lazier... the only draw back on fall.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i totally relate to this. perfectly expressed.