poem: translation of the act

poem: translation of the act

A Chapter by Marie Anzalone

and I would be remiss if I did not address you

 

My friend, the night has been long

 and I stand at the edge of dawn in a world

          too small

    for all the sunlight it could hold.

Much spills over and is lost

  in the translation of the act.

The cynic would view the gold we dug

   with bare hands

     and see only the hidden un-motives

  the False Prophet claiming distorted Untruth.

 

aah but you... capturing me, trapping me

   in my dark, turning me 180 to face you,

       cupping the visage of my spirit in real hands

     sculpted, soil stained.

  Without a thing in this world to give me,

      you gave me back my world,

    one sublime 30 day passage at a time.

and your dove is a messenger

    in my own heart space. She tells me:

  maybe next time around, it will be our turn;

      her wings tickle my rib cage,

    from within, she is restless.

  What do I do with you though this time around?

Do I feed her more, or let her go?

 

Did we know exactly what we were doing

    when we paved a portion

   of the sky for joyous feet to tread?

      Could I, should I have known,

          how limited the time would be,

   and am I ready to give back the

gift that has sustained me as nourishment

   as warm bread to the famished

  frame? I have wrapped your footsteps

for a wonderful year

    in layered shrouds of obfuscation

       so that none would follow their trail

to their permanent impression in stone

       upon my little alcove.

 

He has become the curator of my past,

   and you claimed my future, wresting me

       from all I knew home to be, remade me

and dressed me in the garments

     and thoughts of your people, as you placed

   a lifetime of work-orders in my lost fingers.

You will always have my days in part, I fear

   but my nights have been cold and lonely

       with the type of lonely only those who travel

  alone to another realm

        can ever fully comprehend. I have

     encountered my present, maybe, in the path

 of a fellow traveler, and I need you now

       to tell me, to take me by the hand,

     to lead me to the edge of sunrise, to prepare

  the riggings of a sailing ship, and just tell me:

 

you would follow along as the guide

    instead of companion, on a new

       voyage I would recklessly undertake

  back into waters for whose depths

     there have never been navigational charts.

   And I know now, upon their writing,

that my own words are a lie-

       because I'm going to want to keep

    your dove, and I hope that is somehow

just going to be ok with the world

     that has forgotten how to embrace

    all of its sunlight. Sometimes a woman's life

 is so vast, she requires more than one mapmaker.

 

 

 

 

 



© 2013 Marie Anzalone


Author's Note

Marie Anzalone
exploring a theme, expanding on a dream sequence

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' aah but you... capturing me, trapping me ~ in my dark, turning me 180 to face you, ~ cupping the visage of my spirit in real hands ~ sculpted, soil stained. '

The power of those words seem to resound throughout your poem; your flowing, loving, wondering poem. You present a play with so many scenes, the dove it's accompanying music, and a masterly main character that appears to leave an indelible print on your thoughts.

' I have ~ encountered my present, maybe, in the path ~ of a fellow traveler, and I need you now to tell me, to take me by the hand, ~ to lead me to the edge of sunrise.. .. ' and your next and final stanza surely isn't the finish but .. a repeat performance, perhaps.

Beautiful, complex, intriguing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

11 Years Ago

I wonder if we ask too much from Love, from the other person, from self. That precious emotion can'.. read more
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

I do not know that we can ask too much or too little from Love, but we definitely do ask too much of.. read more
emmajoy

11 Years Ago

Maybe asking all that is too much to ask or expect of one person. Perhaps acceptance of who he or sh.. read more



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'the curator of my past' is a lovely line .. but it is bettered by the thoughts in the last two lines .. I love those last two lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Orlando... I always believed that a poem needed an ending to tie the thoughts together in so.. read more
the mind, the heart, the body, ahh the pulls of love, glass in my ears ? or honey ? smooth music ? or Sex un-orchestrated beauty of time bent ? consummated freedom. Yes, you have great dreams . Step lightly on thin ice....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

I wonder, lee, if we are ever allowed to know exactly how thin the ice is in our little worlds?
lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Or how cold the water under it is ? Drop down your bucket.
I think this is slightly more than a dream..but it's all layers..you're expressing it all beautifully, and it's a lot to feel and think about and i'm incredibly tired or I'd say more

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

11 Years Ago

should i guess?
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

well our internet decided to go down for several hours. In his book, "It," a main character tell a b.. read more
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

11 Years Ago

I've read a few of his books, but that's one I've only seen the movie for. I find that being careful.. read more
so gorgeous , your writes are always so very personable, they show your vulnerability but in such an intelligent way. Your reluctance to release the dove is so touching and I know how this feels too ...
beautifully expressed Marie.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

Blessings, Corset, and thank you for your review. I wonder how many of us have a dove in a cage some.. read more
' aah but you... capturing me, trapping me ~ in my dark, turning me 180 to face you, ~ cupping the visage of my spirit in real hands ~ sculpted, soil stained. '

The power of those words seem to resound throughout your poem; your flowing, loving, wondering poem. You present a play with so many scenes, the dove it's accompanying music, and a masterly main character that appears to leave an indelible print on your thoughts.

' I have ~ encountered my present, maybe, in the path ~ of a fellow traveler, and I need you now to tell me, to take me by the hand, ~ to lead me to the edge of sunrise.. .. ' and your next and final stanza surely isn't the finish but .. a repeat performance, perhaps.

Beautiful, complex, intriguing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

11 Years Ago

I wonder if we ask too much from Love, from the other person, from self. That precious emotion can'.. read more
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

I do not know that we can ask too much or too little from Love, but we definitely do ask too much of.. read more
emmajoy

11 Years Ago

Maybe asking all that is too much to ask or expect of one person. Perhaps acceptance of who he or sh.. read more
How the relationships of the past commune with those of the present and future. How for some love is a series of thoughtful times and episodes that come through and colour our lives with experiences that we then can peruse like pictures in a picture book.
As ever extraordinarily well written. One wonders, without being too forward or presumptious, whether the artistic skill present in this would be so well honed if not for the way you read your experiences.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

For something as infinitely profound as a relationship with another human being, how could we not be.. read more
Ken Simm.

11 Years Ago

Of course that presupposes that all tke the time to read their love and attempt to place it in conte.. read more
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

It is funny what happens with examination of things that removes us from the center of importance. W.. read more
wishing you travelling mercies, may the voyage be sweet and full of adventure

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

I keep forgetting the adage about Rome not being built in day. Good reminder to take to heart :-)
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

and might I add, I am glad you saw what I did not
Emily B

11 Years Ago

yin and yang, we compliment/complement each other :)

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Marie Anzalone
Marie Anzalone

Xecaracoj, Quetzaltenango, Guatemala



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Bilingual (English and Spanish) poet, essayist, novelist, grant writer, editor, and technical writer working in Central America. "A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to ta.. more..

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