A Walk In the Rainbow

I'm going for a walk

A walk in the rainbow

Into rolling green hills

for miles and miles

where the sky is deep blue 

and the sun is bright yellow 

where the rays of the sun 

shine for miles and miles

The colors are warm

while the airs even warmer

with a path stretched in front

for miles and miles

Where does it go?

It's never mattered before

cause adventure Iv'e got

 for miles and miles

I'll end up somewhere 

but there's a journey to enjoy 

Just living in the moment 

for miles and miles

Oh I'm walking in the rainbow

for miles and miles

Author's Note

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

What a wonderful idea! I just love rainbows, their come and go, their shimmering bright, their twins .. to go for a walk, to explore one would be magic.

Your poem seems to thrill in your long walk .. you know you could bathe in each colour .. and then, have such colourful memories. Love it.

[Randolf Ramos]

imagery often are hidden, walking on a rainbow seems, humanity walking in life towards future that we are filled with barriers, feel emotions that are truly our own as we are born this way, but we are responsible for what to feel. that is the beauty of humanity.

[darkgurl]

This is a wonderful write, I found this ever so beautiful. Rainbows are just so magical to look at. Well written!

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..So magical here, this is ever so lovely. I love rainbows..

[Buddhistboy73]

I liked the idea of going for a walk in the rainbow. Free-flowing piece....just watch the spelling on the last line......but good

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

From the expression of colors to the repeating line this piece really captures the endless possibilities that await you when you move forward in the world with your eyes open.