Human Weakness

The rain wells up inside me

And drowns my tears

In a confused chaos.

Stuck on an island

In the midst of my storm -

Electrical flashes

Power my soul.

The thunderous booming

Is the sound of my heart

Tossing and turning

And impatiently waiting

For you to come and hold me

And promise never to stray.

We can sit on my island

And watch as the rain dissipates.

You're the bringer of sunshine

And giver of joy.

Reviews

[Green]

So very descriptive, it really enables me to feel the emotions contained in this piece.