A Wish For Us Always

A Wish For Us Always

A Poem by frogbean
"

to the love of my life love you always nikita

"

STrenGTH

lOvE

CoUrAgE

 

what YOU give ME

 

 LOVE

 

Wishing You Were Here

       with me

Beside Me

   lOVING me

 

Wishing I be With You

    CUddLinG

         LovInG

               CarinG

         FOr You

 

 

Thankfull You

       WILL have

    Me

For 

     Yours

 

 

LUCKY

evryday

i

can

say

i

am 

yours

 

© 2008 frogbean


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You LIED! You didn't and don't mean this anymore... You don't think of me this way any more...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awww baby that is sweet

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aw
this was a beautiful poem. :D I'm glad that you two are together and make each other happy. The configuration is a little bit confusing, but aside from that IT WAS AWESOME AND UNIQUE :D
Hope you're doing well,
give nikita a REALLY BIG HUG FOR ME.

Posted 16 Years Ago


nicely written. very simple yet strong. you use very few words yet still get emotion across that your love is strong for whoever this poem was written for. the only only thing i would say is 'lucky' doesn't seem to fit in with the other strong emotions like 'strength' & 'love'. instead of 'lucky' maybe 'proud evryday i can say...'. my only suggestion. i also love the creative way it is laid out.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 3, 2008
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TRENT, NC



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