Aw
this was a beautiful poem. :D I'm glad that you two are together and make each other happy. The configuration is a little bit confusing, but aside from that IT WAS AWESOME AND UNIQUE :D
Hope you're doing well,
give nikita a REALLY BIG HUG FOR ME.
nicely written. very simple yet strong. you use very few words yet still get emotion across that your love is strong for whoever this poem was written for. the only only thing i would say is 'lucky' doesn't seem to fit in with the other strong emotions like 'strength' & 'love'. instead of 'lucky' maybe 'proud evryday i can say...'. my only suggestion. i also love the creative way it is laid out.