S**T

alternate ending hidden

Love to live to die to kry

to fly away to a

magical place

in and out

without a doubt

cry later

cry now

this is how long

and how short

when you are a  

W***E 

DONT BE A W***E 

GROW WINGS AND SOAR

DO WHATS RIGHT

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This was a blunt harsh slap in the face. I think that it shows alot of emotions or feelings about w***e's/s***s... Me being a psych major feel sorry for them... Anyway.. I like the hidden ending. This was a good write, emotions were shown very well... Great Job! (did you mean to have the K in Kry?)

[getbaked]

s**t thats harsh. youz should try smokin a pipe or somethin kitten.

[Annebelle Ashire]

nice - i found the ending.

I liked this

~*AC*~

I got the ending!!! I got it!!!
"when you are a
W***E

DONT BE A W***E

GROW WINGS AND SOAR

DO WHATS RIGHT"

I liked it... it showed you were angry...

love you!

[*Kantola*]

The color got most of the poem across. CRY was in there 3 times in green. That tells what that person does alot. "Oh, I'm a w***e, i have to resort to sex to get the money i need." That would make me cry 0_0 Good job with this poem!

[lady o]

striking poem, with a hard hitting ending. Well done, like the colour in the fonts, brings more clarity to the piece....

the O

[DANGER]

It was good of course but verry hard to understand.