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A Poem by the devil in I
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How I feel

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Death surrounds. My heart beat slowing down. I cant take this worlds abuse. I feel like dirt always being pushed around.  The only thing I can do is die. Death is my only way out. Everything will be better if I'm just dead. I feel myself going in cane. The screaming inside my head. I can't get it out of my head all I hear is you should die.the incanity is killing me. The voices telling me to bleed. The pain from being pushed around leaves scars. If scars and tears show pain than why won't people stop.so I grab a blade and cut my neck to end all

© 2015 the devil in I


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Sounds like tragic depression to me but read imagination a poem I wrote it will give other options.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ik and thx so much........

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh, well remember, u got me and ariel as your sisters so you can tell us anything.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thx but I wrote this poem out of how I've been treated before

Posted 9 Years Ago


brandon, how many times have i told you, you are not worthless?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Being A Christian, I am not into this type of writing. I belong to God, He made me and He also made you. God does not make JUNK. So whoever got you to feeling worthless is not a friend and needs to talk to God about his own idea of worth.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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the old me is dead tomorrow the new me will rise i will not let any one in.i will only trust myself.no one to turn to except my hatchet.bye world. more..

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