Ugly

Ugly

A Poem by Mir

Dark, but light blue eyes
Long and strawberry blonde hair
She thinks she's ugly. 

© 2013 Mir


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Not bad. Very simple and clean-feeling, and I like how you haven't excluded the possibility that she is in fact ugly. Ambiguous, but not too much so. Good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
She sits and she writes
About her lack of beauty -
Lies penned on paper.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

11 Years Ago

I'm just telling the truth. I wish you could see yourself from another point of view.
Mir

11 Years Ago

:') Thanks, me too. You are GORGEOUS!! :)
devon

11 Years Ago

Aw, thank you!

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