Through the Cracks.

Through the Cracks.

A Poem by Mir
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I love my best friend to death, but I think she deserves better. :/

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The last of our friendship
Is slipping through the cracks. 
We have grown so close
And now we're losing it just as fast. 

I only blame myself
For keeping you around. 
I've been holding you back.
We both know I'm tearing you down.

It's not fair to you
To make you stay with me
When you obviously fit in with the populars
And that's not who I will ever be. 

I don't want to let you go
But truly it's for the best. 
Even though I'll hurt inside
I'll fight through this pang in my chest. 

If you love something, let it go.
A phrase that rings true. 
I've always understood it,
But I never thought it'd be something I'd have to do. 

Please, please don't argue.
You'll make it harder on me. 
You're better than this,
Just open your eyes and see. 

© 2013 Mir


Author's Note

Mir
I realize there are a lot of punctuation issues, but I was too lazy to correct them and I just wanted to post this. I'll fix them later:)
I don't really like the title, opinions?

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Not bad, and there's obviously a great deal of emotion behind this. You present that fairly well here, and while I think you took maybe a bit too solemn a tone with this, you still get the point across well. Good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing:)

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