Your Call

Your Call

A Poem by Mir

I often feel at times,
That maybe You are with me.
And maybe that I'm not as lost,
As I make out to be. 

Maybe You're inside me, 
Guiding me along. 
But Your plan can't be to lead me away,
Because the Bible says that's wrong. 

But all in all You are the greatest; ruler of us all. 
And in the end I have no choice,
But to wait patiently for Your call. 

© 2013 Mir


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Mir
I haven't decided if this is a finished piece or not.

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That is a call that is so hard to await, wonderfully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The way you capitalized the You's indicates that you speak of God..? A great write! xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

thank you! :)
I found this poem as similar to the book of psalms in the Bible. What I mean is that this is one of those verses that is good as it is. I recommend you make a compilation of pieces into a book. I will definitely read that.:-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mir

11 Years Ago

Aww thank you! :)

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