A Place of My Own

It's cool

And It's dark

I'm all alone.

 

It's calm

And it's quiet

I could call this home.

 

No speaking

Just breathing

This is my zone.

 

No worrying

Just dreaming

A place of my own.

Reviews

[Healing Star]

I like this.
I sense you live in a place where it is quite noisy a lot of distractions.
Find your quiet place you need it. Try to expand on this add some more
cool drama to it, bring your audience into your mood even more.

[teardrop]

Love this, simple and wonderful.
Inspiring really : )

[Mir]

Aw thank you ! :)

[The Invisible Girl]

I like this! Keep it up!! :)

[StayAnchored]

I like his poem a lot! It is short and sweet :)

[de_maruf]

nicely done

[Mir]

thank you!:)

[devon]

I like this a lot! The short lines and the rhyming ends of each stanza come together perfectly.

:)

[Mir]

Thank you! I was trying to do something different. I feel like I rhyme to much! haha

[devon]

You're welcome! And no, rhyming is lovely. I think I rhyme too little, lol.