Bad Habit

Another Haiku!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Have a bad habit

 

Don't want to say what it is

 

So I'll shut my mouth.

Author's Note

Personally, I think this is terrible.

Reviews

[Nobody Now]

Simple.
Personally, I think it's brilliant.
It's a thing every human on the face of the planet does that makes no sense.
We want to reveal what lies just beneath the surface, we make people aware of it, yet never really say or share it through direct means.
This is a excellent representation of a human condition.
Kudos.

[Phillitup]

I didn't notice anything wrong with it. You counted all the syllables right. (You would actually be surprised.) This is actually quite good. Nicely penned.
Best regards,
Dell

[Healing Star]

What does Haiku mean, and what language?
It is cute, but how you gonna clear it if you don't talk about it?

[Phillitup]

A haiku is a short form of Japanese poetry. The first line holds 5 syllables, the second has 7, and the third has 5.

[Healing Star]

thank you, and sorry Miranda for my ignorance.
I understand now, you were just trying to write something that met these constraints.

[Susan]

Haha. It's just cute

[Mir]

Haha, thank you for your review! :)

[de_maruf]

aw?

[Mir]

haha

[Aly]

It's honest.
Not all Poetry makes since. But it's Poetry :)

[Mir]

I didn't think of it that way...hmmm haha thank you for reviewing! :)

[Aly]

Welcome :)