I Hate Autumn

I was cold so I wrote this:P

There’s nothing good about this season.

Believe me,

I’ve got many reasons.

Its cold and its wet

Who wants to spend their days freezing?

It rains all the time and snows here and there.

Wind whips around, driving you mad.

Then ruins your hair that you spent hours to prepare.

No, there’s nothing good about this season.

It shouldn’t even exist.

I hate Autumn and those were my reasons!

Reviews

[Phillitup]

I merely would like to share a couple observations and thoughts. To begin with, in the fourth line its should be it's meaning it is. Also, after that line you should add some punctuation because there is some sort of mark at the end of every other line. I don't prefer the last line. I don't feel like it adds anything and it strips it of the poetic air that entices one while reading this. You build up emotion and that line tears it down. I think this is nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

[Susan]

I too feel the cold and you tell it how it is. Nice poem. Personally I love the colours autumn brings

[Mir]

thank you! This is actually one of my least favorite poems. And I love the colors of autumn! haha

[de_maruf]

beautiful

[Mir]

Thank you!

[The Fallen]

:O How could anyone hate autumn! Wanna know my reasons why I love it?!
The colours.
The crunching of the leaves when I walk.
The cool breeze.

But anyways xD Very nice well written poem. It can be improved, although it is still good as it is written

[Mir]

Haha, the only thing I love about autumn, is the boots, because I am obsessed with boots, and the colors! So technically, I'm contradicting myself, but oh well! Thank you for reviewing! :)

[The Fallen]

xD your welcome!

[Aly]

I think with more thought and more effort and changing a couple things this could be a better poem. But good job.

I felt cold and wet while reading this haha

[Mir]

Thank you for the constructive critisicm! And ya, I didn't really put much thought in this.

[Aly]

Welcome! It's alright. That's how we learn dear! :D KEEP writing

[Mir]

i will! :)

[Aly]

:)

[Reverent]

I felt like you could've gone somewhere really new with this. I hope you revisit this in the future, I could see it becoming your best poem.

[Mir]

Wow, thanks!