Disney Was Wrong

Disney was wrong.

 

Not every girl's fairytale will come true.

We should've been taught how to be strong,

Instead of daydreaming about Prince Charming coming along.

 

"Happily Ever After", Is how the story goes.

No-one ever told us, there's more to it than shows.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

great title.....and almost a great poem in my humble opinion. You have to put the 'R' in the word Prince I was just a little concerned about the last line...its meaning was great but I think it might have been worded better....Nobody has one too many syllables...No-one would be better I think...and if you leave out the word WHAT...There's more to it than shows runs better and you have the double meaning...shows being something that is apparent.., and shows being Disney shows... Just a thought...I am not being critical