A girl with a purest heart

you a girl really pretty and young,
you are like song that is beautifully sung.

with you i want my time to spend,
you are someone on whom i can always depend.

with you everthing i do share,
for me you have intense care.

you are like a hurricane that blew me away,
when i needed you with me you did always stay.

we usually have long conversations at night,
your messages makes my day go bright.

you are like a rising sun,
with you i have a lot of joy and fun.

you are like a beautiful dream,
the thought of you makes my eyes gleam.

your angelic wings give me cover,
you wont ever let me suffer.

you are like essence of a rose,
with you my life constantly grows.

you are my shining ray of hope,
our bond is tied with unbreakable rope.

you are like a heart that keeps me alive,
you give me a reason in life to strive.

you are a gem i will always protect,
pure soul of yours in your eyes do reflect.

when you are away i always miss you,
you are like a sparkling dew.

the thing i saw in you from start,
that you are a girl with purest heart.

Reviews

[Violet Stone]

What a beautiful poem, good work!
There are some mistakes like the first line. It should be "You are a girl whose really pretty and young"
Although if you find its perfect the way it is then please ignore me.
Sometimes the poet knows best, not the reader.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this! I will be sure to check out more of your work.
Anyone would be lucky to have someone like this at their side.

~ Sincerely, Violet Stone

[Hasan Fawad]

Thank you so much Voilet. Your review meant something really special to me . and i always welcome people for suggestions. i will post some more really soon :)

[Violet Stone]

You are more than welcome! I'm happy you feel that way and did not take offence. In which case, I look forward to reading more! :)