Found in Hell

After a long time I'm posting. Hope u like it. :))))

We are the bullies, the dark allies our friends.

Our victims the cast, while we direct.

We are the bullies, the walls our stage.

They carry the blood, of countless foes.

We are the bullies, branded with the name.

Brought up in the depths of forever disgrace, we live.

Raised in area of disgust, yet they expect no rebutts.

Darkness provided camouflage to or deeds.

Blind, Caught, Captured within our own tasks.

We are the bullies, the dark allies our friends.

Our victims the cast, while we direct.

We are the bullies, the walls our stage.

They carry the blood, of countless friends.

We are the bullies, branded with the name.

As development increased, so did our sins.

Increasing in pain, the longer we continued.

Prey was easy, the task cruel.

But once again, without support, we resumed.

We are the bullies, the dark allies our friends.

Our victims the cast, while we direct.

We are the bullies, the walls our stage.

They carry the blood, of countless friends.

We are the bullies, branded with the name.

We now see a new city, one not crowded with in fear.

Mercy now a part of us, not depended on how and where.

People have moved back, we have matured.

Times have changed, sorrows stitched, but our past dwells very near.

We were the bullies, the dark allies our friends.

Our victims the cast, while we’d direct.

We were the bullies, the walls a stage.

Which carry the blood, of countless friends.

We were the bullies, forgotten with the name.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

No one likes a bully. No one likes dark allies. No one like to admit they are wrong and hurtful to others. I guess it is all about power and greed...Excellent...:)............
By the way we can bully ourselves...:).........

[AaronFreitas]

This is a powerful write SCRIBBLER. Because you didn't write it with a specific bully or I mean didn't tell the reader who the bully is, I am able to look at the read and see my country as the bully. We are the dark allies of our friends.... the ones that when we go in we show no mercy and we do whatever we please to take over. In our eyes everyone else has blood on their hands and we only do what we have to. To others, we are the ones with blood on our hands and the ones over stepping boundaries and attempting to push views onto everyone else. Now, I don't know if that's what you wrote this about but I love the way you leave it open to interpretation. For me, I am able to plug those thoughts into your words my friend. An excellent write. On the 3rd line of the second stanza I think you had a typo and was supposed to be "Darkness provided camouflage to our deeds," only difference is our instead of or. Excellent work :)

[SCRIBBLER]

thank you it was meant to be able to be related by the reader and u saw ur country while i saw dreams and inspiration. thank you for such a depth filled review.

[wordman]

and i think the united states leads the pack with there meddling and blood shed

[SCRIBBLER]

its not just the US my friend. who knows who else is behind such thoughts and acts.

[Valentine]

The world is full of bullies that like to pick on those weaker than them. To me that is them being cowards. Valentine

[SCRIBBLER]

so true valentine.

[ANTO]

I can see the bullies of the world having their own V.I.P. areas in Oul nick's place now Scribbler. They have to live with their deeds though until that time.
Made me almost feel sorry for them.