White

White

A Poem by SCRIBBLER
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The significance of White in our life!

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White, pristine, unblemished, they say its not a colour.

Its true I believe, since White is much more than mere colour.

Its unique, not like those duplicates.

White stay’s white, not like the others.

Green can turn to dark green, while white is stays the same.

Never changing, staying the same forever.



White, a babies first clothing,

full of innocence and love,

White, a loved ones last.


White, a church’s pride,

full of forgiveness and peace.


White is a balance though out the ground.


White, a blank paper,

but will soon be a talented read.


White, the robe of angels,

spreading mercy and sense when in need.


White is the splendour of the blooming flowers


White, a spark of lightning,

full of relief and fear,

but soon a rocky terrain may drink water without a tear.


White, majesty of a wild stallion,

full of royalty and justice.


White, a sweet nectar flowing through a bee.


White, the youth of a mare,

full of mischief and care.


White, welcomes the winter,

full of peace and quiet.


White, is a choir so sweet to our ears


White, a colour so pure,

filled with a safe feel.

White, colour of an elders hair,

filled with signs of growth.


White isn’t a colour, its a feel.

Its a realisation, a part of this world

White ,a companion through life and death.

No colour could touch the significance of white in this world. 




© 2015 SCRIBBLER


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White, in it's purest form, is achromatic - it is a colour without a colour. Of all the colours we can create, white can not be reproduced by mixing any combination of colours. Once it is shaded, it has been tainted, Therefore, your assessment in poetic form is quite accurate. For example, to create an eggshell white, you have to use a pale brown to create the exact tones. Same with beige or cream.

I enjoyed this look at white in our world and how you bring out its use as a symbol for justice, hope, innocence, and purity.

Grammatically speaking, you may (or may not) want to re-read for the use of apostrophes and plurals.

Otherwise, a nice piece.




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking your time to write a review



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I agree.
"White isn’t a colour, its a feel.
Its a realisation, a part of this world
White ,a companion through life and death.
No colour could touch the significance of white in this world. "
White define clean and peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank You for visiting.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I enjoyed this. It was... oddly relatable. One would think blinding white would seem unapproachable, but you seem to have countered that. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Much appreciated
Love how your describe what white represents to us in the world!! Great Job:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank You much appreciated
This is a very beautiful take on White, and I have to say that I enjoyed every line of the poem. It's imagery is wonderful and overall, I don't think I'll ever be able to look white the same ever again. Fantastic job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thanks Dan
It's amazing how many different purposes and meanings the color white holds. You did a very good job creating imagery for each description. Good work my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking your time to write a review. This was really appreciated.
Thank you for sharing your creative ideas in poetic form. Keep writing and sharing. As for review, my thoughts have been expressed by readers below.

~peace, Todd

Posted 9 Years Ago


SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thanks Todd
interesting reading...to my understanding white reflects all color and black absorbs all color...in that way perhaps neither change...idea very well communicated...thank you for sharing...jc

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much JC for taking your time to write a review.
White is unexplainable in its purity, like love. Its the property of a vastness we can not fathom. Its like light, the explanation of it can not be put into words... but you did a beautiful job of it! I like how you used White as the definition of purity, creative!! Check for typos, other then that... beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank you for such a deep review. Much appreciated
White, in it's purest form, is achromatic - it is a colour without a colour. Of all the colours we can create, white can not be reproduced by mixing any combination of colours. Once it is shaded, it has been tainted, Therefore, your assessment in poetic form is quite accurate. For example, to create an eggshell white, you have to use a pale brown to create the exact tones. Same with beige or cream.

I enjoyed this look at white in our world and how you bring out its use as a symbol for justice, hope, innocence, and purity.

Grammatically speaking, you may (or may not) want to re-read for the use of apostrophes and plurals.

Otherwise, a nice piece.




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SCRIBBLER

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking your time to write a review
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Hi Scribbler. What a lovely read I have just had. I don't think I have ever such praise for the colour white, but I agree. There are far too many 'white' things in the world to dismiss the 'colour'. I was waiting for a reference to the bride . . . Loved the way this flowed down the page without a hitch. The nectar, the stallion, the flowing robes, filled my mind with images as you spoke. Your poem talked to me. Love it, alf

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