White, in it's purest form, is achromatic - it is a colour without a colour. Of all the colours we can create, white can not be reproduced by mixing any combination of colours. Once it is shaded, it has been tainted, Therefore, your assessment in poetic form is quite accurate. For example, to create an eggshell white, you have to use a pale brown to create the exact tones. Same with beige or cream.
I enjoyed this look at white in our world and how you bring out its use as a symbol for justice, hope, innocence, and purity.
Grammatically speaking, you may (or may not) want to re-read for the use of apostrophes and plurals.
Otherwise, a nice piece.
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I agree.
"White isn’t a colour, its a feel.
Its a realisation, a part of this world
White ,a companion through life and death.
No colour could touch the significance of white in this world. "
White define clean and peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
This is a very beautiful take on White, and I have to say that I enjoyed every line of the poem. It's imagery is wonderful and overall, I don't think I'll ever be able to look white the same ever again. Fantastic job :)
It's amazing how many different purposes and meanings the color white holds. You did a very good job creating imagery for each description. Good work my friend!
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interesting reading...to my understanding white reflects all color and black absorbs all color...in that way perhaps neither change...idea very well communicated...thank you for sharing...jc
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White is unexplainable in its purity, like love. Its the property of a vastness we can not fathom. Its like light, the explanation of it can not be put into words... but you did a beautiful job of it! I like how you used White as the definition of purity, creative!! Check for typos, other then that... beautiful.
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White, in it's purest form, is achromatic - it is a colour without a colour. Of all the colours we can create, white can not be reproduced by mixing any combination of colours. Once it is shaded, it has been tainted, Therefore, your assessment in poetic form is quite accurate. For example, to create an eggshell white, you have to use a pale brown to create the exact tones. Same with beige or cream.
I enjoyed this look at white in our world and how you bring out its use as a symbol for justice, hope, innocence, and purity.
Grammatically speaking, you may (or may not) want to re-read for the use of apostrophes and plurals.
Otherwise, a nice piece.
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9 Years Ago
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Hi Scribbler. What a lovely read I have just had. I don't think I have ever such praise for the colour white, but I agree. There are far too many 'white' things in the world to dismiss the 'colour'. I was waiting for a reference to the bride . . . Loved the way this flowed down the page without a hitch. The nectar, the stallion, the flowing robes, filled my mind with images as you spoke. Your poem talked to me. Love it, alf