Loser

Loser

A Poem by Harsh

Losers are the one who make winners.
Losers are the one who never fears.
Losers play for their selflessness happiness.
Winners play for their self interest in winning.

Losers are the one who gets humiliated everytime.
But still they never lose hope and play with the same self esteem and pride.
They never fear how many time they lose.
They never ask why its happening to them.

Winners feel ashamed after losing couple of times,
They quit if they lose for some more time.
But losers never quits because he has nothing to lose. 
They are there to achieve their own truth.

In the race of nine,
Its not possible for eveyone to win at a time.
Somebody has to sacrifice his finishing line.
But still people call them the losers.
But he is the one who make winners.

© 2013 Harsh


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Old wise Football coach stated. Ain't no losers. You were invited to the game and we did our best." I like the positive feel in the poem using the word Loser. I agree with the logic. Hard to lose when you don't
know know how. A good player in the game of life or sport. Know how to win and lose with class. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks coyote..............



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The great glance of the negative side of a game or race "LOSER" . Never thought like that before . Very nyc ... lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks vivek for reviewing it...............
A very interesting look at the term "loser", and from a completely different perspective. While I have to agree with the perspective you put forth here, I also have to add that those that *try* aren't really losers, they are simply people that didn't happen to reach the end/finish line/pinnacle (etc., etc., etc.) first.

The real losers are the ones who never put forth the effort to start with.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks douglas for reviewing it...............
Old wise Football coach stated. Ain't no losers. You were invited to the game and we did our best." I like the positive feel in the poem using the word Loser. I agree with the logic. Hard to lose when you don't
know know how. A good player in the game of life or sport. Know how to win and lose with class. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks coyote..............
Whoa!! This is is really thought provoking and a very witty write. I love the strngth in the simple yet elegant style and the portrayal of the the very wise idiosyncrasy.
Well penned!! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks Atiba.............
The dark story

11 Years Ago

my pleasure:)
Simple and amazing harsh.
Loved it...a positive and equal write.
Thanks for sharing this loser rhyme^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh

11 Years Ago

thanks glitch for reviewing it..............
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

come on...
what in the world Im here for?
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

come on...
what in the world Im here for?

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Added on October 2, 2013
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Harsh
Harsh

Ahmedabad, India



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