failure

failure

A Poem by Harsh
"

Get failed in this

"



Life is full of failures
The best you try,The harder it bangs
The more you try,The tougher it gets
But the one who stands the last
Gets the fame for his name


Failure is kind for his words
It does not discriminate between boy or a girl
It does not see the country you belong to
The process is full of transparency
It does not depicts on the conspiracy
But still the people hate this one
Who had taste this some.

© 2013 Harsh


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Okay, so there are a few problems with sentence structure/using the right words in certain circumstances. For instance "The best you try,The harder it bangs" where 'best' should probably be 'harder' or 'better'. Some other comparative adjective. This just needs a look over, but the concept is good

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Okay, so there are a few problems with sentence structure/using the right words in certain circumstances. For instance "The best you try,The harder it bangs" where 'best' should probably be 'harder' or 'better'. Some other comparative adjective. This just needs a look over, but the concept is good

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Harsh
Harsh

Ahmedabad, India



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