Here Without You

They tell me I'm too young  To feel The way I do, They tell me I am blind,  What I'm Feeling can't be true. they say I''m just a child And you are playing games, They say that I am stupid  To grow up and behave. They tell me you're a liar A player and a cheat, They tell me so many things Somethings I can't repeat. They say that I am crazy, Its true I'm losing my mind, I'm floating through the clouds Leaving life behind. Because everything without you Is incomplete and just not real I don't care what they tell me Because they can't change how I Feel. Being here without you Theres just no way I can feel right, So I'll pretend that I was listening Yet stay with you tonight

Author's Note

this came from my heart

Reviews

[TheAdamBryant]

Wow , just wow , nice petry

[afra]

why this you write this ? you made this girl cry ....so much related ..i bet you cried while writing this awesome poem .....

[harry]

yeah I did cry a little bit ..=/

[afra]

aww hugs*...you will be okay buddy

[harry]

i hope so

[afra]

yeah when you will find another pretty girl you will move on ...lol

[harry]

lol you know me so well ....

[afra]

after all you are my best friend ....=ppp

[harry]

yeah you are ..hey you have to find a pretty girl for me

[afra]

i know a lot of pretty girls but they are all here

[harry]

so what send em here

[afra]

lol how can i send them ?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Sorry to but in but if some have good personalities too send a few here lol

[afra]

lol hw can i do that ...they are girls not a birthday card ..lol

[harry]

come on now days girls are so slim that you can easily mail them

[afra]

what are you guys crazy ...well the girls i know just cant fit in a box

[harry]

aw ah well you can fit in a small box i bet ...lol

[afra]

but i dont want to come there ....=p

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its possible for some. Just put some food in the box and write "handle with care" :D

[harry]

yeah and just out some makeup stuff cause they just cant live without it ..lol

[harry]

just put**

[afra]

very funny guys ...and mr harry potter i can live without make up ...=p

[harry]

Oh really ! ...but you cant live without sun glasses ...lol

[afra]

yeah its true .....well i cant post the girls so why dont you come here?

[harry]

are they beautiful from inside and outside ?

[afra]

yup ..

[harry]

I am coming

[afra]

yayyy ...cant wait to see you

[Harley (arbiter)]

sorry ill stay here and try my chances again with someone :p

[harry]

good to hear that @arbiter .......me too but where will i stay ?

[afra]

aww harley ......and harry you can stay in my brothers room ..

[harry]

really your dad wont mind ?

[afra]

i think he wont .....

[harry]

Well what if does?

[afra]

well then i will dress u like a girl and then he wont say no

[harry]

what no way ...I am not dressing up like a girl

[afra]

lol i was just kidding ....

[harry]

good ..shew ...okay i am gonna be leaving tomorrow ...how far is canada from here ?

[afra]

really far ..=/

[That_Guy]

I know where you're coming from mate. Well done. My only criticism is that the last stanza being only three lines I feel it falls short almost, the flow disrupted so to speak. Maybe you were going for that... Regardless it's a good piece, and one that many people, I'm sure, can relate to. My self included

[harry]

ty

[Harley (arbiter)]

This, man, this was amazing. Its exactly how I feel way better than I could ever say it. I'm 1000% relating to this. Nice job man.

[harry]

ty