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if i had the forethought to

go to you and find 

what i was looking for 

i might be better off

than i am now.

you see i'm deep in lust. i'm drowning

in the communal juices of the population.

each night I dance,

throwing my tumbling body

around and around

until you can feel sweat on my neck 

when you kiss me.

Reviews

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Such a hopeful write here.

[Isolophobe]

To both describe how this made me feel and what I got from it, I would entitle this "Longing". But that would be pretty cheesy and couldn't even begin to really imply the strength of a yearning so unkind and invincible.