bitten

i think i've answered my own question.

my skin, it's berry bitten

the anticipation of today

is in my burning head

and in my burning heart.

how is it that i can care so little

but the image of you

stings me so?

Reviews

[Jordan]

maybe the images bring back memories preferred to be forgotten. I think this poem represents how I feel most days. I agree with the others this is a good poem.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

start to finish, this is a startlingly beautiful poem. "berry-bitten".. damn that is wonderful

[celyn]

this poem is better than good, harold.