I'm making it up.

I'm making it up.

A Poem by Don't find me

you say you are leaving me
i say "then leave."
lying naked i feel your skin
your arms with bones and tendons. 
muscles pulsating.
i could tear them from you with my teeth 
and still not leave any mark.

© 2010 Don't find me


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Goddamn brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


so far it seems to me that you have a way with cramming a lot of intensity into a small amount of words, i love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

come to metros now.. i'll call you in a bit.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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A Poem by Don't find me