closeness

closeness

A Poem by Don't find me

bare but not broken, 
or i hope you don't think so.
soft but not stupid,
or i hope they don't think so.

you might be what i needed,
but i hope not what i need.

© 2010 Don't find me


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reminds me of a broken heart and moving on.

Really thought this line was great "you might be what i needed,
but i hope not what i need." Simple, to the point & strong.

Thanks for sharing your work

Posted 14 Years Ago



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A Poem by Don't find me