I Will Surely Fall Apart

This is my poem for my English Assignment-we had to pick 4 poems of the same topic, and write a new 'collaged' poem...we had to pick bits out of the poems and add bits in to create the 'collaged' poem

I carry your heart with me; I carry it in my heart

When something makes you upset I surely fall apart

Here is the deepest secret nobody knows

I carry your heart with me wherever I go

You are my world, my true

I would do anything for you

I would walk to the ends of the Earth

Because that is what you are worth

I would face all of my fears

Just to have you here

Next to me

I think you’d agree

That a love like this is truly rare

But I think that you should be aware

That if you ever break my heart

I will surely fall apart

 

I love you, not only for who you are,

But for who I am when I am with you

I love you for the part of me that you bring out

For the way you have faith in me always, and without a doubt

I love the way you make me feel

I know for a fact my love is real

I don’t know what I’d do without you; I don’t where I’d be

But one thing that I know for sure, you mean everything to me.

The memories that our love creates will always linger

Objects revealed, silken butterflies concealed in your fingers

Glittering words that splash me; I am covered in stars that glow

A golden tingly feeling, I have come to love and know

The way you send sparks to the sky

Makes me never want to say goodbye

A love like this is truly rare

But I think that you should be aware

That if you ever break my heart

I will surely fall apart

 

I love the way you call me every night

Just to make sure I am alright

The way you hold my hand makes me melt

I love the way you told me how you felt

You were nervous, your hands were shaking

I could tell your head was aching

If I ever have to say goodbye

I will surely cry

I adore you

I adore everything you do

I love your voice, the way you speak

I love how you kiss me on the cheek

We love with a love that is more than love

Angels smile down on us from heavens above

Hold me tight, don’t let go

Me plus you is what I know

Just don’t break my heart

Or you’ll surely watch me fall apart

Author's Note

This is my poem for my English Assignment-we had to pick 4 poems of the same topic, and write a new 'collaged' poem...we had to pick bits out of the poems and add bits in to create the 'collaged' poem

I have already handed my assignment in but I think it would be interesting to hear your comments, I need to know if it is bad or not so I can prepare myself for the mark on my report card...
Thanks in advance :D

Reviews

[Carnation]

His is great! Even if there are parts from other poems in it. You must of gotten an A for the assignment.

[Trigorin]

I think you've completed the assignment fairly well, but it's obviously not very original, unless they were your poems to begin with.

[Harriet Styles]

we had to use other poems :/ it was part of the assessment...but I barely used any lines from poems-most of it was my work...my chosen theme was love...thanks for the comment btw :)