Baby Steps

to help a friend get over someone

You're hurting darling

I know it's true

Be careful of scaring 

Never nice to you.

Do you remember before all this?

You were a blossomed rose,

Lost yourself in all the bliss

Wilting and everyone knows

Time to get better young flower

Lets prune the dead leaves

You'll feel better after the shower

I know, men are thieves. 

Cut those strings off your mind pretty puppet

No need for his control any longer

He won't hurt you so long as I can help it

With my help, you'll get stronger.

It's all baby steps dear friend.

Ones you can't take lightly

You'll stand tough in the end.

Stance changed ever so slightly.

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

good flow and rhythm.. the concepts are accessible and translatable..

[Frank F. Atanacio]

another very enjoyable read ")

[Shadowlily]

lol I probably could continue.. it was written right before bed

[David Keagan]

This is awesome! Definitely can see this poem continuing but great write as stands.

[Im His Daughter]

love it this is awesome