The Feeling

How a girl feels when hurts someone

Her heart feels like it is breaking to pieces

She feels like she wants to scream and cry

But she knows she will weak if does those things

She knows she did what was best for him

She knows he will be hurt, and he might hate her

But she hates herself for doing it

Because she could never love anyone with her heart

So she just sits in her room alone and hopes one day she can change

She hopes her heart can change and make her love someone in the future

Reviews

[DrD]

There are those believing themselves incapable of love only because they have never really come across it. But the sense of despair here is well presented and I enjoyed this one very much.

[Crystal Ellyson]

Thank you very much!!!!!

[Extant]

Heart issues of a different kind. The story of this is well conveyed. The one thing though to work on is making sure all the words are there. But other than that, I like it and can relate to it well. Sometimes I wish my heart could be 'normal'.

[Crystal Ellyson]

Thank you for the advise and the review. I should have re-read it before I posted it. I get to typing and I have it all in my head but sometimes it don't come out right.

[Extant]

I understand. I have the same tendency. You're very welcome.

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[Crystal Ellyson]

Thank You for the review, I think it still needs a little bit of work.

[A. Amos]

Don't worry too much:)