The Paradise regained:)

a poem about monsoon rains:)

Pilfering of amorphous pearls by the architect of earth,

the most overlooked extraterrestrial escape ever..

Rescued by the rampant atmospheric-rampart,

welcomed back to the cantata of chirpy birds;

 

Torment terracotta of the ill-fated skeletal farmer

melts slickly down to your fingers of panacea..

Land accoutered in terra firma stripped off exposing

the come-hither greening to the parched parasites..

 

The hard by brook, galloping towards the grandeur of blue infinity,

gurgles to death revealing her captivating curves..

Countryside child chisels out of a paper a lifeboat sending it

to salvage his happiness lost in the classroom book learning;

 

Virgin lass, hypnotized by the luxury of kisses, permits you

to enter the classified areas, a great mark of hospitality;

You nurture the poet's fountain pen, he attempts to

envelop you, the Paradise regained, in earthly words;

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this while sitting in the lap of nature suckling each and every drops of the milky-rain...

Reviews

[satheeshkumar]

You are playing with the words..... and especially.. the Last stanza

Virgin lass, hypnotized by the luxury of kisses, permits you
to enter the classified areas, a great mark of hospitality;
You nurture the poet's fountain pen, he attempts to
envelop you, the Paradise regained, in earthly words;

You are great dude......
Keep writing... your thoughts.....and share with us.....

[Maan]

It must be a heavenly atmosphere around you when you wrote this extra ordinary poem. :) Made me wish for rain, yet resisting the cruelty of sun here. Any ways your poem is wonderful in every way, the idea, the wordings, the flow. All the little factors came to me with perfection and gave me an excellent touch of your poem inside. Keep writing and keep sharing.

[Sneakygnome]

Striped ~~> stripped?

I liked a lot of the word choices and most of the imagery.

a couple lines lost me, either semantically or visually. But that might be my prob, not the poem's :)

Interesting writing.

[Pencrafter]

Here's another one. I'm just going to copy and paste my comments.
This review comment keeps popping up on my screen. It's still an interesting poem with a kaleidoscope of words and thoughts.

[Pencrafter]

Here's another one. I'm just going to copy and paste my comments.
This review comment keeps popping up on my screen. It's still an interesting poem with a kaleidoscope of words and thoughts.

[Pencrafter]

This review comment keeps popping up on my screen. It's still an interesting poem with a kaleidoscope of words and thoughts.

[Androglossia]

It's not all about the monsoon rain for me. You were talking about a lover and about making love:) It's all about touching every part of a woman's body without leaving a part of it untouched.

You have a good literary technique that goes beyond the simple and evident intention of words or actions.

Good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Monsoon rains must seem to last forever. I lived in the tropical. 90 days of rain leave you yearning for the sun. I like the emotion and the description in this poem. Took me to the rain and your thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Deep choice of beautiful words and beautifully written as well. A sort of mystical fantasy of paradise... Love it