Betrayed

Betrayed

A Story by kelvin
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A fictional story of betrayal it happens though

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I feel oddly strange as I leave work early to surprise my wife with flowers, dinner and a night of dancing. I'm so excited. I mean it's been a long time coming for us to have a little wine, dining and romance.
While driving home, I Attempt to call her a few times but i get no answer. So I rationalize and say perhaps her phone is dead, or maybe her ringer is off. Because I've made false accusations to my best friend that I felt something was going on with her husband and my wife. But she assured me nothing was gong on and I should stop thinking that way and so on. So I pull into my residency with flowers in hand to meet my beauty. I was hoping that she would be dressed and ready to go within the next hour, for I have had a change of clothes before I picked up the flowers. So as I opened the door to my castle, I can feel a thick tension as my first lady meets me at our bedroom door. She says to me that I surprised her while forcefully pushing me to the couch and picking my feet off the floor. She gives me a kiss and says don't move a muscle until she gets out the shower. She rushes off to our bedroom to get ready for our big night out on the town..I'm about to explode with excitement. I sit there a sec and I think that this is a perfect opportunity to scare her, me being a clown for a scare and all. I go to the bedroom to look for a place to hide. I giggle as I hear her turn the knobs to the shower. I begin my search for a good hiding place. I look under the bed and behind the door for the perfect hiding spot . I Then decided that the closet would be the perfect spot. I tiptoe my way to the closet and opened the doors. To my shocking surprise I see half naked , is my best friend and her husband hiding in my closet.

© 2018 kelvin


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kelvin
Tell me what you think. I know a lot of you would be beyond mad.

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Betrayal of all betrayals!!

Wow….wasn’t expecting such a twist at the end..

Great story Kelvin nicely penned!

It is also good to know you are still here at the Cafe too!

Yb

Posted 2 Years Ago


Oh my, what a surprise ending! I was not expecting that at all. Great story Kelvin!

Posted 6 Years Ago


kelvin

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your words here I appreciate then a lot
Donna

6 Years Ago

You are welcome! 😉

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Added on June 16, 2018
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