Scorned Woman

Nose running, head aching

She’s so mad her body’s shaking.

Her eyes so red, 

many tears she shed

She’s a volcanic eruption 

about to cause mad destruction

Her heart’s been broken now its hell to pay,

so take this notion

 

Her hearts been torn 

so prepare for hell’s fury she’s a woman scorned

Author's Note

scorned, mad, angry,vengeful whatever it maybe but its all brewed from a angry or upset type emotion. what you think

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

So many women are scorned by their abusive boyfriends or wicked husbands that it drives them to the edge of abyss. Some people say it is their fault , that they brought it upon themselves but I say leave them alone if you can't reason with them for it is hard to change others. We can change ourselves and be a good example. It takes two to tango so let us be respectful and compassionate towards them . We don't know what people are going through at any moment but we can be sympathetic.
A very good write dear poet.
For a minute it sounded like a sad song...:)

[kelvin]

Thank you it always good to hear your most insightful thoughts here and you a*s right why fuel the fire when you can simply stop the heat and as you said just leave them alone

[Sami Khalil]

You are right too dear poet...Have a great one...:)

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she sounds angry very good poem

[kelvin]

Yes she does I feel sorry for him. Thanks for your words

[Donna]

It is easy to get like that if your heart has been broken, but I have learned from my many broken hearts, it is not worth it to get mad. It wasn't meant to be. I like your writing.

[kelvin]

Thank you for your words and I totally agree

[conversations with her ..]

woah.... this was deep and beautiful.


loved it.

[Carol Cashes]

Scorn I will take with me, with my stank-face and throwing shade, but touch me? It won't be a tornado - it'll come quiet in the night and you'll never see it coming. Good read.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned. Kevin that is sooooooo true, I have been there. It is an awful rage I get like an F5 Tornado and am ready to bring the house down on someone's head. This is an awesome write.

[kelvin]

Yeah I can't imagine going through it from a woman's prospective but I've seen the effects. thank you very much for you thoughts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

good for her, i hope she gets her revenge...whoever is the perpetrator probably deserves it.

nicely penned, Kelvin.

jacob

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you thoughts here.

[Everett DeValle]

Yup, she sounds angry lol.

Cool rhyme scheme on a subject matter I've seen first hand, um, a couple of times.

[kelvin]

Thank you and I know what you mean haha it can get ugly.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I wouldn't want to be on the recieving end of her scorned woes, I can tell yah, you have created a feeling of climatic suspence rather effectively me thinks, well done

[kelvin]

Well I thank you kindly and I wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of her vengeance either

[Marie]

Some women erupt in fury; some encase themselves in ice. But a woman will get her revenge in the end.

[kelvin]

Thank you Miss Marie its always good to hear your thoughts on a read thank you again