Poet Superstars

Poets…
Some of the baddest
beings known to this earth
yet some say we’re
cursed.

Oh we’re cursed?

Cursed to have the abilities
to put words in motion
bringing them to life on paper
in verse.


Hot like fire!

We poets have the mentality
to grab anyone’s
lust and desires
like we’re the pen and paper
poet Messiahs.


With pencil to pen
we get it all hot with lust and desire
when pencil makes intercourse with paper
it sets the stages whole tone
to fire.


Pure mad skills and ambitions of
grabbing the audience’s
intellectual intuitions,
making them attach to us,
have them looking for their
next high like
alcohol and drug addictions.


We lay our poems in lines
and then pour the rest in drinking cups.
Then we sit back and watch as they
anxiously snort and consume
our poetry up.


The highest intoxication!
We send mind, body and hearts racing;
sending them far beyond
any soul’s
unknown destination.


We’re not gods,
but it seems that we’re gods
to our fans: the ones
looking for good poetry
in its highest of high demand.


Poets can bring the mind to its
closes depths or
send it racing off to a far,
but in the end my friend
I must say
that we’re some
Poet Superstars.

Author's Note

Tell me what you all think hey we all some Poet Superstars.

Reviews

[R. L. Ives]

Hot like fire, we poets have the mentality to grab anyone’s lust and desires,
like we’re the pen and paper poet Messiahs.

Tough i felt the entire piece is fantastic, I did a double take right here. Yowza :)

I just finished a conversation with someone about writers and how we tend to over think things. My response was that it is both a blessing and a curse.

[kelvin]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it we poets and writers do have a spark of creativity in mind thank you again so kindly

[Donna]

This is really brilliant! From beginning to end, I love it. We are Poet Superstars!!

[kelvin]

Yes we are glad you like it

[conversations with her ..]

yeah you killed this...

i could really relate to it as well, whatta masterpiece.

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think that this is a great poem, really got me thinking about my approach to audiences as a poet-performer, well done!

[kelvin]

thank you very much for the nice review here glad you like it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sixth stanza, last line..would out the "up" --unnecessary...line is good without it.
not sure of the very last line either...up to that point i identified with this very much...

there are many who don't really like poetry, that's true...but there are also those who seem to look to us to chronicle the times, and chronicle our unhappiness so that readers can relate and feel better about themselves...and maybe that is a burden...while at the same time...we do feel lucky that we can do this at all...it is a gift and a curse...

but i wouldn't consider myself a superstar at all...just someone who is supposed to do this.

so much said in this i feel is truth...and well put.

jacob

[kelvin]

Thank you for your opinions and insightful thoughts here but the wording Poet Superstar isn't a title for one to take in conceit, for its a statement or title one can take as being able to have the courage to put there work out in public, where to it being sites like this or to the stage to be viewed by others and have judgement or critiqued upon this poem is merely for encouragement to all of us who are poets as some may relate and get every word in the poems some may not, as some may think things are unnecessary others may think its perfect as is only a matter of one helpful and insightful review such as the the one you gave here but we as poets aren't the same and certainly not all our work will be understood by all but this is what makes us as poets unique. Again I thank you for taking the time to give insightful thoughts on this read I really appreciate it.

[Leslie Philibert]

A talented poet expresses great truth about poetry here, a fine write with the energy of a young man mixed with the wisdom of a writer ; poetry is a curse, an addiction,and and at the same time the purest form of literature. Nice work.

[kelvin]

I thank you very much for you for your kind thoughts here I appreciate it this is an encouragement for all of us thank you so much again.

[Mary Christabel George]

You have written it for all poets.
I had to like it....:)

[kelvin]

Thank you and I'm glad you like it.

[Mary Christabel George]

:)

[kelvin]

Shine bright

[AYVID N]

Awesome! No words.
This poem made me see myself in a new light!
Thanks so very much for this uplifting write Kelvin!

[kelvin]

Thank you very much fellow Poet Superstar you are truly in that title and I'm glad you like it I really appreciate it.

[AYVID N]

Thanks again and wow! :)

[kelvin]

You're very welcome truly

[luviva]

k, i love your start, the portrayal of how naive this world's people are naive about poets.
i also loved how you stood up for us, we are the "pen and paper messiahs" so cool. The highest intoxication, we send mind, body, and hearts racing,

sending them far beyond any soul’s unknown destination, my best lines.
overall my friend, loved it for it erasedf out all the doubts i had about how much of a good job i can do!!

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much and I'm glad that you lost those doubts thanks again for the nice thoughts

[luviva]

you are welcome ;)

[Holly Mason]

this is truly beautiful
you have managed to capture the essence of poetry as well as the author so vividly it shines
so many good lines I cannot even count them....
what a title choice it has a ring to it that just attracts the reader
this is filled with many word gifts with beautiful bows
thank you so for sharing

[kelvin]

Oh thank you for your nice review fellow Poet Superstar I truly appreciate it.