Its Begun

For I have come, I’ve come before thee
as like a thief within the night while you
hear the sounds of the loudest trumpets
breaking the sound barrier sonic booming
to the light.

I’ve come to take back home my beloved,
for those who loved, believed, and praised
in thee leaving the callous and insidious
hell-bound on earth to flee, flee, flee and
run to any sitting rock to hide under in misery.

So what are you nonbelievers going to do.

For it has begun.
Judgment day has come.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think of this one for this is a reality that will most certainly come to light.

Reviews

[R. L. Ives]

This speaks to what has been on my mind quite heavily of late. Things are picking up momentum. Your words are here for us to find, and be reminded that its really time to wake up and stop telling ourselves we still have time.

To the library with this one.

[kelvin]

Yes I agree with you and glad to see that people take notice to reads like this and as some of us will be ready some most certainly will not.thank you so much for your thoughts

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beautiful piece and i l believe in this piece alot. This will occur quite soon

[kelvin]

Yes I agree with you completely on that and thank you for your words I appreciate it

[SHEEMA HUQ]

quite intimidating, you are extremely good I think at expressing a powerful moral stance, guided by your fath no doubt, I liked

[kelvin]

Well thank you kindly and I'm glad you think so and glad you like it and again thank you some people tend to shy away from writes like this

[D. Martin]

Very good writing and I believe it is true, and soon to happen.

[kelvin]

Thank you for your thoughts here I appreciate it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think we better clean up our act.

the creator sure didn't expect this kind of society when he started out with his plan...

peace and love

not this...

there will be a incredible fury.

jacob

[kelvin]

Yes I agree with you there and thank you very much for your thoughts here

[Ayvid N]

And we better be prepared! A stunning and chilling write. I thank God for believers like you. It's a great reassurance in times of dwindling faith!

[kelvin]

Thank you very much from one fellow believer to another

[Marie]

We all must meet the Judgement in our own ways...those who don't believe will...I'm just starting a story about that...

[kelvin]

thank you and maybe I can get to read that story one day

[Marie]

Well, I haven't progressed beyond the opening paragraphs...It will be a while before I post it.

[kelvin]

well all writing starts from the first word sentence to paragraph well when you finish I will read in on it.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Judgment is to come at the end of God's plan" at the last day yet some will believe that people are "judged" immediately at death, and are sentenced to some kind of heaven or hell.

You have written here a very profound and thought provoking write for the nonbelievers out there....

I know Jesus loves me... because the bible tells me so :O)

[kelvin]

Well thank you for the kind words I do appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

A great judgement call to wake up humanity from its slumber to smell the reality of our dire ending but there is hope in God and His promises in any religion that seeks Him and His light and love. There is no reason to live in misery when we can live in total joy one day in Heaven and share eternal life with others...
A very powerful poem dear poet that people need to heed it...:)

[kelvin]

Yes exactly why live in sorrow and hate when you can have all the joy and happiness that exists in God and heaven for I have smelled the reality and when I'm called I'm going home sweet home and we both know what home I speak of haha Thank you very much for you true words here.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. I totally understand . All the blessing may come your way...:)

[kelvin]

The same to you

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^:)