Frenemies

Frenemies

A Poem by kelvin

Your friends you have today could be
your enemies of tomorrow, such sorrows
of ones hate and rage that's created in a
sense of ugliness.

Hellbent not heavenly sent unjustified
actions fueled by impulsive reactions
of ones highs despised by their lows
looking at the one who truly loves you
as foe,

for this is not the way,
not the way to go.

So take a syringe of promise and inject
it into your fatty tissues and let it adapt
in your body and delude your issues of
hate, jealous,and envy that protrudes
yet waits in hiding.

Two faced sides mentally divided yet
as one united, while one tugs against
the other in a display of power and
dominance to over throw the others
nonsense.

At what sense do we call sense when
you can manipulate others minds
brainwashed with no washer nor dryer,
fueling the flames of hate that burns within
like fire.

People must be reminded that what things
seems to be are not always things right,
people we love and gain trust in, can love you
for an eternity it seems, but have hidden bad
interpretations of you.

People have ways of being one way and then
the next totally different, like a night and day
effect. We never know what someones thinking.

So in the end I must say to all be wise to the
fact of.

© 2013 kelvin


Author's Note

kelvin
People are sometimes funny I guess everybody have their ways

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Wowza! So much truth in this write...one never knows, this happens with friendships as well as countries and marriages. Says so much kelvin....

So take a syringe of promise and inject
it into your fatty tissues and let it adapt

Ha, love this....well said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

haha well thank you I'm glad you like this and that's right we never know what's going on with peopl.. read more



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I can relate to this one. I have been let down by the ones I trusted most in my life, but from that I have learned from it. I have a handful of friends that I have known since high school. These days, everyone is out for themselves, or they want something from you. I don't need that in my life, I will keep the true friends that I have, I don't need any new friends. When I think about it, the ones who did let me down, really were not friends at all. It is sad because now I have a hard time trusting people. I don't mean to go on and on.
I like the way you wrote this Kelvin!

Posted 6 Years Ago


kelvin

6 Years Ago

Yes this is one everyone should relate to and have experienced in some point and time. I'm glad you .. read more
DEEP in your insightful truth...well spoken, poignant...a lovely read my friend.

1 hundo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

I do thank you for you words here.
Wowza! So much truth in this write...one never knows, this happens with friendships as well as countries and marriages. Says so much kelvin....

So take a syringe of promise and inject
it into your fatty tissues and let it adapt

Ha, love this....well said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

haha well thank you I'm glad you like this and that's right we never know what's going on with peopl.. read more
As we grow older and more wiser we realise who are friends really are.... the real ones grow old with you....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yes but even at a older age we must still be careful for people these days are making the act of lie.. read more
I am afraid that some folks have motives that are not always true, it is wise to be aware but not too fearful, as we need one another. It is a fickle world out there, and one that doesn't always have our best intentions at heart. Well done Kelvin, it is always good to read your sage wisdom :).

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much and I agree with you fully.
A very powerful message here of the reality of friends and relationships to family members. I have been there too dear poet and got burnt by both who claimed to be on your side but they were on the side of power and greed and their selfish interests. I guess we have to be experts on reading body language , thoughts of others and knowing their intentions before they hurt us . People can change and do anything for their own glory even step on the innocents and the needy... Human nature is very complicated and changeable like the weather so let us keep guard and not be naive towards certain people . If it smells like a fire , then it is a fire...
Good job as always...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome too wise one...:)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yep Yep
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
I love the title "Frenemies". Amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

thank you
Haha well written. I grew up on the streets of Los Angeles, CA. I was brought up with "there are no such things as friends,only the familiar. Bunch of spicy a*s people out in the world. I've been burnt by so called friends.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yes yes you know get it here, for we have so called friends such as this thank you for your thoughts.. read more
Great thinking here Kelvin:

"people we love and gain trust in, can love you
for an eternity it seems, but have hidden bad
interpretations of you.
People have ways of being one way and then
the next totally different, like a night and day
effect. We never know what someones thinking."

People are complicated and you have made a great attempt at bringing this out with your eloquent writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind words here
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

Oh! You are welcome! :)

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